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Assignment写作中链接过渡的最高境界——承上启下句

今天,我们来解决assignment写作中的一个很常见,但是鲜有人去尝试的东西:承上启下。貌似是起承转合武功秘籍中的高阶版了。

      这样的句子,放在中间段作为段落观点句,不仅高端大气上档次,而且,极大地增加了衔接和过渡上的得分,让文章在有形中更加连贯通顺,不再只有简单的 secondly 或者 however。

      定义一下承上启下的句子:把上文的关键内容完美概括,又开启下文的核心论点

      1. 位置

      既然是承上启下,一般在文章正中间的地方,已经写了1-2个主体段,我接着往下写新的主体段,就这么承起一下。

      如果即将开启的段落和上一段是转折的关系,我们常常会是一个让步的句子:尽管上文说的有些道理,但是我们还需要注意的是下面的这种更多数的情况。

      如果即将开启的段落和上一段是并列或者递进的关系,我们常常会前半句总结上文,后半句补充出下文:除了上面说的一个优点之外,还有一个也值得注意。

      具体位置是(下图中红色的地方):

assignment写作

2. 方法

      转折类句型
      … aside, …
      Although …/ despite …
      That is not to say that the … is flawless. Chances are that

      并列、递进类句型
      Apart from …/ Aside from …
      In addition to … concerns, there are also …

      相关例句摘抄
      Ethical reasons aside, there are also social reasons.
      Money worries aside, things are going well.
      Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be …
      Despite these arguments, there is an equally strong case to be made that …
      Despite …, there has been a catalogue of (errors/ failure/ success), which its advocates gloss over.
      That is not to say that the tourism industry is flawless. Chances are that
      Aside from being well written, the book is also beautifully illustrated.
      In addition to health concerns, there are also more deserving social causes for the money that should be considered before the arts.

      3. 示范

      题目1:住在大城市好不好?

      上段:城市环境差,导致健康问题

      下段:城市医疗水平发达,即使有病,可以及时救治

      承上启下(转折)
      Health concerns aside, better medical service in the city certainly contributes to a longer life expectancy.

      上段:城市环境差,导致健康问题

      下段:城市生活紧张

      承上启下(并列、递进)
      Apart from the health concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be too stressful living in the city.

      当然了,不是每个题目都可以写承上启下句。特别是上文内容不好概括的时候,不必硬上,可能会… 肌肉拉伤。所以同学们也要看情况。对于assignment写作还有相关疑问的同学可以联系我们的客服!浩天教育拥有400余名由英语专业写手、作文修改润色专家、留学申请专家顾问和专业资深翻译组成的学术团队,欢迎您注册成为我们的用户,体验极致网课代修与留学代写服务!

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